A Patch of Darkness (Sierra Fox #1)
by Yolanda Sfetsos | Ebook, 375 pages
Samhain Publishing (May 2012)
Urban Fantasy
A Patch of Darkness by Yolanda Sfetsos was one of those books that I felt sure I would love. The synopsis promised an ...
A Patch of Darkness (Sierra Fox #1)
by Yolanda Sfetsos | Ebook, 375 pages
Samhain Publishing (May 2012)
Urban Fantasy
A Patch of Darkness by Yolanda Sfetsos was one of those books that I felt sure I would love. The synopsis promised an interesting story with the type of kick-ass, damaged heroine that we’ve all come to know and love from Urban Fantasy novels.
Sierra Fox makes a living finding ghosts and sending them up in front of the Council that has done so wrong by her in the past. Nothing and nobody is what they seem as Sierra tries to sort both her private and work-life out, whilst changing the dire fate of mankind.
At first it seems as though Sierra is used to this odd world in which she lives, but as the story develops and new creatures and issues come to light, she seems very shocked by them all. In all honesty, she is not at all the kickass heroine that I was hoping for her. The best characters are those which develop throughout the story, and are moulded by the events, but Sierra remains the same throughout the novel. She apparently has more power than she realises, but nothing really explains why this should be. She just has flashes of this new and improved power whenever it seems necessary to the plot. She also has frequent episodes of TSTL, such as realising that maybe she shouldn’t have followed the villain of the piece into somewhere isolated after all. It’s not that she’s a hateful heroine, or anything like that – the issue is really that she is not very well-developed initially, and she makes little progress throughout the book.
Another thing which was a little patchy was the world-building. It was very reminiscent of other Urban Fantasy books that I have read and enjoyed, such as Stacia Kane’s Downside Ghosts series. This isn’t necessarily a bad thing, as a lot of world-building is sometimes a little confusing, and a point of comparison can be helpful. However, the world that Yolanda Sfetsos created doesn’t have enough character of its own to stand truly apart from the worlds that have presumably inspired it. ‘Facts’ about the world are doled out as and when they seem necessary to the plot, which stops the issue of info-dumping, but threatens the credibility of the story.
The writing itself is not the best that I have ever read, but that often doesn’t matter when the story is engaging enough to make it unnoticeable. This wasn’t the case in A Patch of Darkness, however, as the writing was constantly a little clumsy. At other times there were grammatical errors, and incorrect use of punctuation which makes it seem as though I am nit-picking, but they were just really obvious as my attention wasn’t held by the book.
The cast of secondary characters are all pretty one-dimensional. The only one who was really interesting was Sierra’s sort-of-neighbour, Jason Papan, who actually manages to keep a secret for most of the book. The others just seemed to be there to move the plot along, or for absolutely no reason (although the novel is part of a series, so something might develop later). Jonathan, Sierra’s boyfriend, presents a bit of an enigma, but emphasis only seems to be placed on him when there is a lull in the action.
VERDICT:
All in all, A Patch of Darkness was an OK book. There was nothing awful about it, but I think that with a little further thought, it could have been a great novel. Everything just needed a little more filling out to give the novel and its characters a life of their own.
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